Denied fade_123's designer application

Discussion in 'Designers / Engineers' started by benroxalot, Jul 13, 2013.

  1. benroxalot

    benroxalot New Member

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    What is my In Game Name? fade_123
    Am I a constructor? Yes
    How do I get to this? /plotme home:2 fade_123
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    #1 benroxalot, Jul 13, 2013
  2. Dzyriq

    Dzyriq Just another humble Overseer

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    You have a nice start here and i'm sure that you can improve it a lot. That is what I can tell you from viewing the pictures.
    So if you want the rank for sure go and add detail and design that pulls us into the building. Eye candy is the key.
     
    #2 Dzyriq, Jul 13, 2013
  3. PickachuKrew

    PickachuKrew Active Member

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    A suggestion from a fellow designer: The Top looks a bit empty, you might want to try adding a second, possible third layer. Smaller than the previous layer. It could add that touch and make it a real fortress.

    Like Dzyriq said.
     
    #3 PickachuKrew, Jul 14, 2013
  4. stanky2

    stanky2 Overseer

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    Here is the problem - you built a giant box over flat ground - you have no details... even your own house has rooms, and floors, and trees outside, and good lighting everywhere - a castle should too. I agree with Dzy.

    Denied.
     
    #4 stanky2, Jul 14, 2013
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