I think it's decent but since you posted it here I assume you are looking for constructive criticism! -Why the devil fire theme with upbeat happy music? -A few spelling errors -Lag, no recording mods such as CameraStudio used. Other than that it seems like your hobby is turning into a talent
Just some pointers: -Check spelling (as said before)- use a spell check utility equipped software (Microsoft Word): even Google searching it can help- just type "Define (Word)" into Google and it will suggest what you are looking for. Or use a dictionary if that's easier. -Try to keep the theme and the mood of the music alike; listening to "Happy Happy Joy Joy..." while walking through a dark forest kind of confuses the viewer. -Try to set your system so that you can record, and sometimes it's best to know your system is able to record without lag before you actually do it; that may mean investing in a better/newer system. Not the best I've seen, but you're well on your way.
