Denied Subway_monkeys Designer App

Discussion in 'Designers / Engineers' started by ALEXisAcookie123, Mar 24, 2014.

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Is this plot amazing?

  1. Nope

    9 vote(s)
    75.0%
  2. Yep

    3 vote(s)
    25.0%
  1. ALEXisAcookie123

    ALEXisAcookie123 New Member

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    Are you a Constructor: Yes

    Only builder: Yes

    IGN: subway_monkey

    The warp (Ex.: /p h Thr0ttie): /p h subway_monkey

    Post atleast 2 pictures of your plot:

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  2. stanky2

    stanky2 Overseer

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    There are a few problems - the first is that you have a lot of empty land, by empty I mean boring and without features, you have some hills towards the back but look at your sports area, you don't even have a foot path to it. The buildings are also - plain-jane boring buildings that most anyone could build within an hour or two - and they are mostly empty - no features, no details. Now look at your ship and bay... the ship has a square aft section and a flat bottom, it just looks like a house in water that you shaped to look like a ship on front and top.

    Now there is good here - your ship interior does need work but it's a great start, the work you put into putting it lower in level shows you are willing to do something, but when you build a lifescape - something that is supposed to look like a painting of a part of the real world, you need to consider details.

    One of those details is not to have a statue of yourself bigger than anything else on the plot... if everything else was perfect, I'd say no simply for having that there - it doesn't belong.
     
  3. stanky2

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    Oh and the poll question on top - if i ever see anyone do that again I'm denying their application for including it.
     
  4. ALEXisAcookie123

    ALEXisAcookie123 New Member

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    Okay, do you mean I can't put the question? Or is it whatthe question was?
     

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