The Secret Of Pine Mountain (a Soon To Be Book)

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Should this be a real book?

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  1. BudderUSA

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    ~The Secret of Pine Mountain~
    1769, September 19th
    The wagon on the harision almost looked peaceful, but to see what it held inside would only bring death and distruction. Fore the young man opperating the buggy was Professor Thomas And his wife Catherina, they had set out on a journy to find a place to settle down. Knowing Catherina was pregnent, Thomas drove slowly so that even the slightest of holes would not disrupt the passangers. "You know we arn't getting anywhere at this pase Tom, for all I know we wont even make it to Germany by sundown!" Catherina said this with haste under her breath and turned to Thomas. "If you want to build your asylum we better get a hurry on." Looking at the rolling green mountains only dotted with dark amber trees, because of the sheer vast amount of tall willowing pine trees Thomas said, "Yes, we are surly going to get there by sun down, there's a strech over this hill and my grandfather's lodge is around a corner by an old orfinage." Catherina turned back forward and looked over the setting sun with its' lushios Lilac purple, lemon yellow and vibrent pink and a huge red flaring ball in the center. "Fine, but please do hurry, i'm pretty sure Melodie is coming."

    Just posting this on here to see if it will be a nice book to write.
    The plot line is: A man and a woman are moving to Germany for a new life, soon they have a younger daughter named Melodie and already have a older son named Samual. Once Melodie is born and the asylum is built and Melodie is at the age of 3, her father murders her mother for research only to fine out Samual at the age of 12 is watching and takes Melodie to safty in the abandoned orfinage. Once 'safe' Samual dissapers and Medlodie is left alone at the age of 6. Samual was taken by his father back to the asylum only to find that he is now a surgen and care taker of over two thousand patients. Thomas's work is on humans and will change the world with the help of manipulating both Melodie and Samual into insanity.
     
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  2. BudderUSA

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    Trying to use as much literature that i can with out being overwelming, and i know some words are spelt wrong with is just a rough draft.;)
     
  3. Legopossible

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    >:l
    My god as soon as I try something the whole server follows XD
     
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    Also shouldn't this post be in Server Media/Written? :p
     
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    Changed to right area