Creative Designer Plot Wip (steampunk Build)

Discussion in 'Creative Building Projects' started by Luc Vandendriesschen, Aug 21, 2014.

  1. Luc Vandendriesschen

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    Hey everyone!
    Here is my Wip steampunk build! Hope you enjoy!
    Constructive criticism and feedback would be much appreciated! ^^
     

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  2. PONM

    PONM Well Known Member

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    Looks really cool so far man.
     
  3. Exavious

    Exavious Forum Legend

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    Looks nice with those resource packs, very minimal though. I have not visited it in person so take into account my thoughts are purely based off the provided pictures and the limited angles they were taken at.

    Just a few opinions of mine in regards to improvements would be to:
    • Make the main island larger/complex or have many more islands.
    • Try more complex, natural looking designs for your islands than the simple cone shape.
    • Provide some sort of transportation for your island dweller to have for traveling to and from his home, such as a small airship.
    • Move your island up into the sky, or at least down further and make the giant dirt cube around it look sky-ish at least. Looks a bit odd as is.
    • Add more features for your dweller, such as agriculture and livestock. Crafting area, storage, etc.
     
  4. ChopHAPPYman

    ChopHAPPYman New Member

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    looks really nice! I've missed a steampunk builder on the server! :)
     
  5. Luc Vandendriesschen

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    Alright, will do! ^^ I've done interiors and some Easter eggs. as for the floating Islands the ones you see now I was planning on making about 10-15 more, varied in sizes.
    Thanks for the feedback it is much appreciated!
    Also if you wish to visit the plot it is /p h:2 Vandenluc11
     
  6. Luc Vandendriesschen

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    Update on how its going! :D 2014-08-27_18.16.39.png 2014-08-27_18.16.54.png 2014-08-27_18.16.26.png
     

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