Denied Eastyz Application

Discussion in 'Designers / Engineers' started by Eastyz, Apr 20, 2014.

  1. Eastyz

    Eastyz Member

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    1. What is your in game name?
    Eastyz
    2. Are you a constructor?
    Yes
    3. Are you the only builder on the project?
    Yes
    4. What is the warp to get to your plot?
    /p h Eastyz
    5. Post at least 2 pictures of your plot
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  2. Dzyriq

    Dzyriq Just another humble Overseer

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    Thank you for the great application.

    I really like the concept of the plot. What I feel here is that you could make it a lot better with ease. You are not far from the designer rank. Read my tips and see what you can do and apply again after 2 weeks. That will give you some time to make it even better.
    Some tips:
    • More structure details on the outside walls
    • See what you can do with the free space outside the building , It feels like you have just run across the place with bonemeal and then nothing else.
    • Inside the wall: When I'm inside the the main wall I would expect something else than tall grass and flowers.
     
  3. Eastyz

    Eastyz Member

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    Haha you got that correct Dzyriq i did run around with bonemeal ;) Thank you for the advice i will take it on board and i will see what i can do to improve it.
     

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