Denied Enginner Applications

Discussion in 'Designers / Engineers' started by 2coolkenneth, Dec 7, 2014.

  1. 2coolkenneth

    2coolkenneth Member

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    what is your in game name? 2coolkenneth
    are u a constuctor? yes
    are u the only builder of the plot? yes
    what is the warp to ur plot? /P h:2 2coolkenneth
     

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    please accrpt it pleases ill do anything
     

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  3. BSPiotr_backup

    BSPiotr_backup Overseer

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    I'm intrigued by the idea of a parkour course for the rank, but lets look at your plot objectively:

    1) Its very open:
    There is a ton of empty space and very little to see other than the course itself. I don't mean to say "make the course harder" but rather "is there something people should be seeing while they are doing the course". Think eye candy, props, etc. Make it rewarding to do better.

    2) Its very samey where it isn't open:
    Almost every jump is a running jump. I might not know much about parkour, but changing block colors and using the same trick 20-30 times doesn't sound fun. It might be better if you improve #1

    3) There isn't much going on underground either:
    You need to expand both over and underground on this plot if you plan on having an underground section of the course. Solid gold block walls are fine for a normal course, but you are here to get a rank of engineer.

    4) You need to sell your plot:
    You are here to get a rank, engineer. Sell it to me. Why should I hire you to build my plots? Your lack of creativity and use of the available space means I would not give you an important project.

    So I apologize, but I have to deny this application.
     

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