Denied LeagueofJohn_C Designer Application

I don't really know if i'm allowed to post here- but just some feedback. I really like Egyptian themed builds. What you could do with your sphinx is makes its head a lot more chubby, and what I mean by chubby is wide. I feel it's quite narrow. Just some feedback, my sister built one back a few maps ago

 

John, I don't want to discourage you because you show a lot of promise here, but it does need a lot more work to get a yes from me. First thing missing is lighting - you have none on the ground, and you may be thinking that a bunch of torches everywhere would look ugly - which is why you need landscaping as well. blend it in... something else is, my very first big build was a pyaramid, it's way too easy of a thing to build to be worthy - I say you yank that thing down, and redo your sphinx only this time do it much bigger and throw in the lion body that a sphix has.

Your interiors were minimal - I did like sphinx trap, you could have put a lot more fun stuff in there... the two column buildings were empty and the quartz one totally didn't look right next to everything. The pyramid is hollow and boring, real pyramids are 95% solid rock. The entrance was boring and undecorated...

What I'm saying is - you did an excellent job here and there, but your attention to detail, or lack of it, is what separates you from what we look for in the designer rank. You are better than 90% of the builds I have seen, but I'm looking for the top 5%.

I say try again, but I'm gonna let other OS's have a say and not give it a denial, so who knows, maybe one of them will give it a yes.

 

Human head on the body of a lion - your 'body' looks to be undefined and a diagonal line down to the ground.