Denied Marshall's Designer Application

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  1. Marshall

    Marshall Survival Staff

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    1. What is your in game name? Marshall
    2. Are you a constructor? Yes I am
    3. Are you the only builder on the project? Yes
    4. What is the warp to get to your plot?(ex. /p h Thr0ttie) /p h Marshall
    5. Post at least 2 pictures of your plot. How about 3?:D
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  2. Dzyriq

    Dzyriq Just another humble Overseer

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    I really like this and I look forward to see the improvements I spoke to you about. Good luck on your quest, because yhis build is very close to designer.
     
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  3. Marshall

    Marshall Survival Staff

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    *Bump* I had made upgrades to it about a month ago, sorry that I forgot to post that on the forums. :p
     
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    Dzyriq Just another humble Overseer

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    I'm going to decline this build. I like the military base theme but it does not really come alive to me. For it to become alive you really need the small details that come with humans being active in the area.

    I'm going to take the example of a normal bedroom. It is easy to throw in a bed , a painting on the wall and window looking out, But these 3 things are not enough to make it come alive. Most bedrooms have some kind of closet , drawers for cloths and so on.

    So work on the details and really think through what a military base needs to work. For a example, were do the staff go if they get hurt in some way?
     
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  5. Marshall

    Marshall Survival Staff

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    I will admit I did rush on that part of the build which wasn't a good idea at all. I am a better builder than this and this does look bad on my part. On another note thank you on the feedback, I will fix these problems up and get back to you in a month. :)
     

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