1. What is your in game name? speedydyy 2. Are you a constructor? Yes 3. Are you the only builder on the project? Yes 4. What is the warp to get to your plot?(ex. /p h Thr0ttie) /p h speedydyy
Speedy I like the idea - but you need a whole lot more stuff in there - right now your build is 90% flat surface, a few square things and two nice statues... you used a grand total of like 18 different blocks where as some designer builds have 100 different blocks or more. You need a lot less empty space, to not make square buildings and features (squares are easy) and to use more materials so it is way more interesting to the eye to look at.
Don't just add 'things' - add unique and interesting things that add to the story and build a complete picture - don't use the usual objects, find ways to use blocks in ways that other players have never done, spend as much time planning on what you are going to do as you do actually doing it. Think of something you know you can't build - and try and build it anyway. Last night you sounded like you could add a few things and it would be good enough. Think of it this way... you are trying to make a painting as impressive as this one... Right now you have the sky and water and two people and a building or two, and you want all of the details and perspective and unique things that only you can do. We should be able to look around your build and see a story... What is that guy with the pole doing? Those are sheep - he's a shepherd, but why is he looking up? There is another guy down by the water, oh look in front of him - there is someone int he water - who obviously fell. But nothing is above him - he fell from the skuy - who is that guy? That's a whole lot more than sky and water isn't it?
