1. What is your in game name? SkillzAR 2. Are you a constructor? yes 3. Are you the only builder on the project? yes 4. What is the warp to get to your plot?(ex. /p h Thr0ttie) /p h:3 SkillzAR 5. Post at least 2 pictures of your plot Beware, once entered, you may NEVER leave.
OK - as you know I went through your haunted ride/experience and you have some really good ideas and some things that still need work... I want you to continue on this and really make it work. OK first is first - I hate, more than anything, seeing a lot of flat surfaces on a plot. You have the nice coaster fence on the oursite and then lots of flat ground between there and the main event. You need something - lava falls, interesting statues that work with the theme of the park (not just statues of players, but scary things), and STUFF. Right now you just have a few music box experiments, one quite nice btw, but still they look ugly just sitting out there in the middle of nowhere. If you want to do music, do it in the middle of the ride, but your whole plot needs unified into one big theme! As we mentioned let people know they they should ride the coaster - but at their own scary risk! Two things I hate about most people's coasters - exposed redstone, and overuse of power tracks. Part of the fun of a real coaster is the speeding up and slowing down, then speeding up again, and exposed redstone is just lazy lazy lazy. It's so easy to hide... if I see exposed redstone it better be part of the theme or something you simply couldn't hide because of the laws of Minecraft. Finally - I had to learn this the hard way too while doing my second treasure hunt. Maze's suck. Especially mazes where every wall looks the same and there is no clue - like different types of torches or different types of chests or different types of walls... some way to let a player know that they are progressing and not just wasting their time. People are here to have fun and not be frustrated. My suggestion, dump the maze entirely - and either re-do it in a much more interesting way, or replace it with some fun and fancy redstone trickery. Again, i think you can do this all fairly quickly and if you do this, and some more on your own, i'll even let you reapply in 14 days (two weeks.)
