Creative W.i.p Town (designer Plot)

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  1. DeadlyKitten929

    DeadlyKitten929 New Member

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    I am making a town for the rank Designer, Go to /P h:3 DeadlyKitten929 to see my town, please tell me any ideas you have and if you like it, Feedback is appreciated.

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    UPDATES: I have Changed The Floor In The Hostpital and im going to extend the town to amke a park, im also going to thin out the trees
     
  2. Juwn

    Juwn Active Member

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    A good start, would suggest you add more detail to the coaster, make it exciting
     
  3. Dzyriq

    Dzyriq Just another humble Overseer

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    I like the overall design of your plot but it does need a facelift. I see there are many things you got to work on. Ill just say 3 things now and then when you have done something about them then we can move on to other things.

    • Building quality, You have many nice buildings on the property how ever they need higher quality over all. For example: The hospital should not have a grass floor.
    • The lake. This is one of your cool features. I think you need to lower it one block and make the lake shore fit in with the themes you have around it.
    • The birch forest. It is a little bit too tight I think that can be turned it very good park.
     
  4. DeadlyKitten929

    DeadlyKitten929 New Member

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    Thank You For Your Feedback, i'll be making some changes. :cat:
     
  5. Dzyriq

    Dzyriq Just another humble Overseer

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    Please keep updating this post as you work on your plot. Then the community can help you develop the plot a little at a time.
     

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